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Friday, April 3, 2020

Pigeon Mission



Hi, its me Chloe and for today's blog post I did a made up pigeon story.
We had to watch this video, and then choose an activity.
I chose to make up my own story about a pigeon spoiling a spy's mission.
This activity was really fun to be creative and make your own mission.
What would you do if a pigeon stole your plane tickets??!!

4 comments:

  1. Thank goodness they let you on the plane! That would have been a disaster! I really like how you are thinking of the use of paragraphs Chloe, they can be hard in made up stories. It would be great to use speech marks for your dialogue next time.

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    1. Thanks Mr. Sutherland for commenting and next time I will add speech marks!

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  2. Hi Chloe, I love how creative your story is. Using words like Swwosh and Kasplot made me hear the sounds that the pigeon made in my head. Keep working on that paragraphing, you are going great!

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