Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, March 30, 2020
Terrifying Teeth Story
Welcome to my blog, my name is Chloe. For my blog post today I had to watch a video
about a story called teeth. Click on THIS to go onto the site.
This activity was fun to do, if you ever go onto the site you should watch a video, and write
a story about it. What would you do if you lost your teeth in the river??!
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This is a really funny story Chloe! I hope I don't have to use false teeth! I would like to see you use more 'show don't tell'. Instead if telling us that the teeth fell out into the river, how could you show this?
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