Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, March 24, 2020
Guess Who it is ???
Hello its Chloe here, and in writing we had to describe someone that we knew really well. We have been working on describing things. If you had to do this who would you do it on. If I ever describe someone again then I should put more descriptive words into it.
Who do you think this is about????
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I'm guessing it is your little sister??? Younger siblings always get picked on by their older brothers and sisters. You did write some nice things too.
ReplyDeleteYes! It is my little sister, I was being a bit mean with some of them but it's fine...
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