Thursday, April 16, 2020
My Dad as a Child!
Hi, its me Chloe and today I did lesson 2 from or Lock down writing slide.
For this task we had to write about one of our parents as a kid! I chose to do my dad!
Who would you choose? And why would you choose them? This activity was
really funny, my dad laughed when he read it!
I hope you enjoy!!!!!!
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Hi Chloe, very clever writing! Well done on sharing this piece with your dad - it is always nice to have an audience when you are creating work. I like the way you have made this writing funny by comparing your dad as a child to how he is now.
ReplyDeleteHi Chloe, I bet that he laughed when he read it. How did he find the bit about his hair?
ReplyDeleteHi there Chloe, this was funny to read. Poor Dad and his giant mouth! Can your Dad actually sing? Now is a good time to practise. Remember to proof read for punctuation, what a great story!
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