Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, July 3, 2019
Super Fail on Snow Day By Chloe
Hello, it's me Chloe, for the last week of the term, we got to choose what type of writing we got to do, I chose to write a narrative, we had to find out the structure, language features, Tense, Style, Purpose and the Audience on the type of writing we chose. Have you ever played in snow? Please give feedback on how I can improve next time! I hope you like/liked it!
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Great story Chloe I loved all of the description it was wonderful keep up the good work!!!
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