Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, May 8, 2020
Bottlenose dolphins Information report
This is my information report I did last week for writing,
I have reposted it because it was hard to read last time.
We picked any animal of our choice, and then do our research,
planning and then finally writing it so here's mine. What's your
favourite animal? Here is where I got most of my information
from, I hope you enjoy!
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hi Chloe, I love all the work you've clearly put into your report on dolphins. The way you've posted this makes it hard to read on your blog. Did you use a google doc? You need to publish to the web and embed it.
ReplyDeleteHi Chloe it is Ella,
ReplyDeleteI really found your report interesting,
maybe next time you could embed it different so it is not so small,
but overall I really like it and I learnt alot about dolphins.