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Friday, November 22, 2019

Outdoor jump Around!



Hi, Its me Chloe and this is my commercial from last term, I have done a commercial on why you should go to Outdoor Jump Around, Outdoor Jump Around is and Outdoor trampoline park with lots of fun things to do! ( by the way Outdoor jump around is not a real place)
I hope you like it!
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 12, 2020 at 2:43 PM

    Hi Chole its Logan here i liked the way that you had that venden machine and you had lots of detail so well done

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 13, 2020 at 2:34 PM

    Hi Chloe i really like how you added a video it makes way more sense to me
    It makes me want to go to the trampoline park more often.

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  3. AnonymousMarch 7, 2020 at 10:11 AM

    hi chloe its Lachie i like the way you had the vending machine and the dancing trampoline well done

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