Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, June 5, 2019
Endangered Super Sea Turtles!
Do you like Sea turtles? What is your favourite animal? Hi its Chloe here, and welcome to my blog post, in literacy we have been working on writing informational reports, we had to write one on an endangered animal, plant or ecosystem. I chose to do mine on an endangered animal, Which is Sea turtles. Please comment on how I can improve.
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hi chloe. Its lexie and I would like to give you back some feadback. I found that the prederters interesting. Know wonder sea turtles are endangered. I think you should do the habitat in the slide. from lexie
ReplyDeleteHi Chole its Abby here and i love your slide i have qustion what is a tiger shark maybe you could put in a glossary but great job that was amazing:)
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