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Friday, April 5, 2019

Sir Edmund Hillary Report By Chloe




Hi I'm Chloe and welcome to my blog, my literacy group was writing a report on an influential New Zealander I chose to do my report on Sir Edmund Hillary, I hope you like it!

1 comment:

  1. Hello Chloe, Zara here
    I like how you included why he was a beekeeper. Maybe next time you could add when he died? Also you didn't add the answers to the quiz questions could you please do that.
    Zara

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