Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, April 5, 2019
Sir Edmund Hillary Report By Chloe
Hi I'm Chloe and welcome to my blog, my literacy group was writing a report on an influential New Zealander I chose to do my report on Sir Edmund Hillary, I hope you like it!
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Hello Chloe, Zara here
ReplyDeleteI like how you included why he was a beekeeper. Maybe next time you could add when he died? Also you didn't add the answers to the quiz questions could you please do that.
Zara